Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Numerous
people
are of the belief that every person is in charge of their health in terms of what should they eat or avoid.
In
contrast
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other
people
are inclined to conceive that administration has the main role to protect their sound
lifestyle
. In the ensuing ,
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I will delve into
this
subject. Plenty of the population has
this
notion that the government should be the guardian of their health and provide the best situations to fulfil
this
demand since all the supplies
such
as
foods
,fruits and other stuff have been produced by the government.
Furthermore
, If they do not have sufficient observation
people
will get various aliments from expired and corrupted materials,
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instance
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recently a group of communities in a rural district have venomed by the polluted water.the main faulters were the administrations of that village.
On the other hand
, some group folks argue that any person who is responsible for their own sound
lifestyle
. they claimed that in entire our life we have made a decision about what to eat or not thanks largely to
this
fact they have stood firmly against the other opinion.
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example
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numerous
people
including adolescents have not willing to exercise and most times junky
foods
have been eaten by them.
In addition
, In some cases
such
as children parents should be managed their diet and
lifestyle
and instruct them
how
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they can watch out them selfs. In conclusion,some
people
including me are of the belief that the lawmakers should be the organization which takes care of
people
in terms of qualification of
foods
and any stuff that
people
have been consuming
becuase
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because
the crucial issue about healthy
lifestyle
has been defined everything that we eat. even though some other
people
conceive that the government have had the main role
to
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distributing or producing
foods
so they have to be in charge of society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preventative care
  • lifestyle diseases
  • public health policies
  • healthcare accessibility
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • nutritional information
  • government intervention
  • health education programs
  • public health campaigns
  • personal accountability
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