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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school . However,others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinoin.

#people #news #study #school #waste #time #opinoin
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 world. So, some people think that the
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government
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international
news
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 for students who are between 12 to 15. While others believe that knowing the
news
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students
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 hand, we have those who
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support
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because
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 must know what is happening in
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disagree with what we have mentioned
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because
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