IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

#people #laws #control #amount #noise #person #disturbance
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Noise
Use synonyms
 pollution has become an increasingly common problem around the globe. The majority of the
people
Use synonyms
 hold a view that the authorities should impose heavy
laws
Use synonyms
 and
regulations
Use synonyms
 to control the
noise
Use synonyms
 that
people
Use synonyms
 make every day because
this
Linking Words
 causes distractions to
people
Use synonyms
. The following essay will discuss the positives and negatives of imposing
laws
Use synonyms
 on
noise
Use synonyms
. Commencing, having a strict law on
noise
Use synonyms
 will allow
people
Use synonyms
 to have a peaceful sleep at night because too much disturbance to a human's sleep will bring consequences to life
such
Linking Words
 as health issues.
Besides
Linking Words
, good health sleep is essential for an individual to function their brain normally. As an example, in Australia, there is a law regulated by the government that after 11 pm on weekdays no loud
music
Use synonyms
 is played and if it is violated hefty fines will be given to
people
Use synonyms
.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, another plus point is that
people
Use synonyms
 are able to concentrate more on work without being distracted by external sounds.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, there are disadvantages to imposing
laws
Use synonyms
 on sounds because if authorities provide
regulations
Use synonyms
 to loud
music
Use synonyms
 and noises there will be a downfall in certain industries
thus
Linking Words
 they need loud noises to work. As an example, in the
music
Use synonyms
 industry to publish a song or make one studio should use different types of noises to test.
On the other hand
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
 have the freedom to do whatever they prefer in a country, if
laws
Use synonyms
 and
regulations
Use synonyms
 are imposed individuals will start using headphones to listen to
music
Use synonyms
 and
this
Linking Words
 will bring serious negative effects to health
such
Linking Words
 as hearing issues. In conclusion, there are drawbacks and advantages to providing
laws
Use synonyms
 to control
music
Use synonyms
 but before imposing the
regulations
Use synonyms
 authorities should consider the effects.
Submitted by wathsala.lekamge1997 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: