Cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

People

now have the access to learn about different

cultures

through

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various ways. Which makes the

world

now becoming more similar. In

this

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I will discuss the reason why we are now finding more similarities between

cultures

then

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explain why I believe

this

is a positive impact

for

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society.

To begin

with, the reason why

people

around the

world

are becoming more similar is because of

advancement

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in technology.

This

allows

people

to connect with each other from different parts of the

world

using technology.

For example

, we can now still be in touch with our friends that live in another country through social media and mobile phones.

In addition

, due to

globalization

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the

world

has become more diversified.

This

allows

people

to exchange

culture

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and share experiences without having to visit the place physically. I do,

however

, believe that

with

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cultures

around the

world

becoming more similar will create a healthier environment, because one can find

their

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sense of belonging.

This

helps

people

to become more

open minded

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and it reduces racial discrimination which will

then

allow

people

to have equal opportunities.

For example

, in a city like Melbourne, there

are

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a broad range of different ethnic groups in the city.

Therefore

, it makes it very easy for international visa holders to find

a

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decent

job

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and support themselves during their time in Australia. To sum up, I believe the reason why different parts of the

world

are becoming more similar is due to the improvement in technology that allows

people

to learn about different

cultures

in different ways. Personally, I do think

this

is a positive impact

for

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society because

this

allows

people

to become more

open minded

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and find their sense of belonging.