You have recently seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a pharmacy. Write a letter to the hiring manager to apply for the position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and explain why you are writing. Describe your qualifications and experience relevant to the job. Request further details about the job and the application process.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my interest in a part-time job at your
pharmacy
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. I recently saw an advertisement in the ABC newspaper for the same.
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, my name is Priyanka Kumari, and I am an internationally trained pharmacist with 4 years of experience in the same field.
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, my purpose
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writing is that I am actively looking for
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kind of work opportunity to start my career in Canada.
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, I am a registered pharmacist from India with a master’s degree in
pharmacy
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.
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, I have 4 years of experience in
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a pharmacy setting
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pharmacy
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settings, so I am perfect for your
pharmacy
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assistant role.
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kindly let me know about the main responsibilities of the role,
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write about working days and timings.
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, I would like to ask how can I apply for
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job. Please give me the hiring manager’s email to start my application process. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Priyanka Kumari
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Try to elaborate a bit more on your specific skills or achievements that make you a good fit for the job.
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Make sure to mention how your experience aligns with the specific requirements of the pharmacy job.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured and flows smoothly from one point to the next.
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You used a polite and professional tone, which suits the context of a job application.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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