You have an upcoming meeting with your manager to discuss your performance in the past year. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter -describe your achievements in the past year -say what areas/skills you need to improve on -suggest a plan to improve those skills/areas.

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letter regarding the performance discussion meeting tomorrow evening. I am part of the organization since 2015 in the credit analysis domain and recently I have been promoted to manager for the ESG credit factors

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has played a crucial role by rolling out various reports on ESG risks and opportunities, which have been highly appreciated by our clients.

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resulted in additional revenue generation and engaging new clients for our company. My

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has topped amongst the top three profit-generating teams in our organization. Since ESG is a continuously evolving process, I think we should initiate governance-related publications as well for which I need to undergo training since it is a fairly new concept and we get multiple client queries on it. There is a complete workshop which is going to be held in Germany

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month for which I would request the company’s approval.

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will surely help me enhance my knowledge and understating to better serve our clients.

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, it will enable me to expand our knowledge base by training my

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on the same. I hope you have got an idea for tomorrow's meeting. I look forward to meeting you tomorrow. Yours sincerely, G

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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