Whether a person achieves his goal in life or not is mostly related to luck. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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luck

are the key factors which are responsible for a

person

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success. While some

people

argue that

luck

is the main element which is accountable for achieving the targets in life but others disagree with it. Personally, I partially agree with

this

opinion. In

this

essay

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both

view points

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viewpoints

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followed by a conclusion will be discussed.

To begin

with, the factors which are necessary for being

succesful

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successful

. In

this

modern's era, everyone wants a healthy lifestyle and doing efforts to obtain it.

For example

, lakhs of students are participating in competitive exams to get a job,

however

, few of them are selected who do well preparation for the exam.

Thus

,

hardwork

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hard work

matters to get success and fulfilling the desired goals.

Furthermore

,

people

can acquire skills by learning them and

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their knowledge by doing work on it.

As a result

, a target can only be achieved by learning it. Some

people

,

however

, might argue that

luck

matters. A person can achieve his desires in some cases by having

a better

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luck

.

For instance

, Sometimes scholars learn limited

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syllabus

for an exam, and luckily they get the questions from that part only. In that case, they think they are lucky. As some

people

are good in numbers and they apply for a lottery at which they can earn huge

amount

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of money, luckily they

selected

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as

a

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winner and become

a

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rich man in few time.

Consequently

, prosperity depends

for

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the

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growth as well. In conclusion,

although

some

people

are in favour of good

luck

but

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I think that a hardworking personality

get

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his desires with

lot

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a lot

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of

experiences

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.