You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development? You should write at least 250 words
Today, in
present
modern world, Add an article
the present
internet
along with Correct article usage
the internet
latest
technological equipment Correct article usage
the latest
are
widely used to have easy Unnecessary verb
apply
access
to songs
and books
because the world has become a global village because of advancement
in Fix the agreement mistake
advancements
technological
arena. Not only having reach to free Add an article
the technological
music
and books
,
it has Add the word(s)
but,
also
given an
easy Remove the article
apply
access
to
people to get Change preposition
apply
copyright
Replace the word
copyrighted
music
and books
without paying a penny. Despite having some rare positive effects, it is, to a large extent, a negative aspect of the
modern technology.
On Correct article usage
apply
one
side, one
can view it as a positive development because of having free-of-charge access
to books
and music
, especially as books
are said to be the source of spreading knowledge and awareness while music
pleases the sad soul. If one
has a book or song from the internet into one
's computer without any payment, one
may argue that s/he wants to receive education through books
or wants to listen
Add the preposition
tolisten
songs
to change his/her sad mood; therefore
, there is no harm in it by downloading the material from the web browsers free of cost. However
, contrary to this
attitude, it may lead towards the creation of many negative elements in the
society.
It is Correct article usage
apply
well-known
phenomenon that writers and singers earn their livelihood through their writing and singing. As they need money to feed their belly, and if they are not properly paid, the quality of the Add an article
a well-known
books
and songs
may go down. Equally, it is also
alarmingly possible the
genius minds may stop choosing book-writing or song-singing as their profession, resultingCorrect your spelling
that
a
lack of good Change preposition
in a
books
and songs
in the
society. Correct article usage
apply
That is
why,
it is necessary for the governments to make sure that the writers and singers are paid a handsome amount on every download so that they may continuously remain motivated towards their profession and produce quality material.
In conclusion, technological advancement, no doubt, has provided easy Remove the comma
apply
access
to things like books
and songs
which may seem a positive aspect of it. Nevertheless
, unpaid downloading from the
websites is Correct article usage
apply
highly
negative step, equal to stealing Add an article
a highly
the highly
one
's wealth.Submitted by i.linguist1 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?