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Some government say how many children family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary & right for a government to control the population in this way. Agree or disagree. Give reasons.

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population
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major
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 problem
to
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the
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all authorities.
Therefore
, they may
control
this
population
 with introduce new rules and regulations
such
 as the family has more than one child, they should pay
tax
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taxes
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for
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 the local authority. I strongly believe that
this
 is a right! decision
control
 the
over
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overpopulation
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population
.
Firstly
, day by the day number of
child birth
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childbirth
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 increasing rapidly all over the world. Because most
human
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humans
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not
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 think
environment
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effect
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effects
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 when they made many children per family.
Sometime
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 they do not have enough money to provide them
proper
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 education, nutrition,
medication
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.
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,
the
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society
grown
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 with uneducated, unhealthy and
unemployment
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 generations,
such
 as
,
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 most Indian people.
That is
 the reason India is
a
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number two in the
world
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 most
population
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populated
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 list.
Furthermore
,
Chinese
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the Chinese
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 government
also
 Struggling (with
same
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 issue. Because the country has
many
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more
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 women than men, might in the future they could not find any man to get
marry
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.
That is
 the reason they influence
with
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 duty.
Secondly
,
over
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overpopulation
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population
 effecting to
the
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environment
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environmental
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 resources
such
 as water,
energies
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energy
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,
lands
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land
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 and many other things. Because their requirements daily increasing and all the local authorities have to expend
many
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 money to the Improving basic facilities for the public.
For example
, they should provide
to
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the
people
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people's
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house
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, food medications.
In addition
, some of the
development
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countries
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countries'
country's
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government
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governments
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 expend more money
to
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on
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 space exploration for discovering new lands. Those are facts
major
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and major
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problem
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problems
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 nowadays.
Therefore
, they often
control
over
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overpopulation
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population
 with charge new taxes and sometimes they band to make
second
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 child. In Conclusion, all the authorities should be
Control
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controlled
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the
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 make many children in
the
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one family and necessary to charge duty.
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