Some government say how many children family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary & right for a government to control the population in this way. Agree or disagree. Give reasons.

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population

is

major

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problem

to

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the

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all authorities.

Therefore

, they may

control

this

population

with introduce new rules and regulations

such

as the family has more than one child, they should pay

tax

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taxes

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for

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the local authority. I strongly believe that

this

is a right! decision

control

the

over

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overpopulation

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population

.

Firstly

, day by the day number of

child birth

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childbirth

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increasing rapidly all over the world. Because most

human

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humans

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not

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think

environment

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effect

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effects

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when they made many children per family.

Sometime

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they do not have enough money to provide them

proper

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education, nutrition,

medication

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and medication

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.

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,

the

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society

grown

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has grown

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with uneducated, unhealthy and

unemployment

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generations,

such

as

,

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most Indian people.

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the reason India is

a

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number two in the

world

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most

population

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populated

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list.

Furthermore

,

Chinese

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the Chinese

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government

also

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same

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issue. Because the country has

many

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women than men, might in the future they could not find any man to get

marry

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.

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the reason they influence

with

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duty.

Secondly

,

over

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overpopulation

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population

effecting to

the

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environment

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environmental

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resources

such

as water,

energies

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energy

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,

lands

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land

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and many other things. Because their requirements daily increasing and all the local authorities have to expend

many

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money to the Improving basic facilities for the public.

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, they should provide

to

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apply

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the

people

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people's

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house

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, food medications.

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, some of the

development

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developed

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countries

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countries'

country's

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government

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governments

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expend more money

to

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on

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space exploration for discovering new lands. Those are facts

major

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and major

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problem

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problems

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nowadays.

Therefore

, they often

control

over

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overpopulation

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population

with charge new taxes and sometimes they band to make

second

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a second

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child. In Conclusion, all the authorities should be

Control

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controlled

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the

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of the

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make many children in

the

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one family and necessary to charge duty.