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In the past, teachers were the primary source of knowledge. Yet, nowadays, students have a vast source of information, so teachers are no longer necessary in current education. Do you agree or disagree?

#teachers #source #students #information #education
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It is commonly argued that students nowadays no longer need
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 as their primary source of information. I strongly disagree with
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 viewpoint, as I believe that
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 are still needed even though there is knowledge everywhere.
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 of all, human contact is necessary for learning because learning is typically a social event. There are very few people who can learn wholly alone.
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 and peers give us social support and feedback that allows people to study more effectively.
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, anyone who has been studying an online course will tell you that it takes them longer to complete a project. They miss the natural interaction of having a
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 face-to-face to get immediate feedback.
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, if you ask many experts in their field, they would say they become interested in a subject because of an initial
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 who made the topic interesting. Perhaps, students would be able to pursue the subject alone, but it was the initial person that sparked their love of an academic area.
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, a student wouldn't be interested in
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 a boring Physics subject if it was not because of his
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 who explained the lessons so lively and demonstrated the laws of physics in
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 a dynamic way. While there is no question that knowledge is free and can be obtained anywhere ,
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, there are certain courses like medical courses ,
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, that need the guidance of a
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 for him to be able to fully comprehend and obtain the skills needed. In conclusion, I do not agree that
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 are no longer needed by students. In my opinion, there is no substitute for real-time feedback from a
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, we should be grateful to our
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 for making us achieve our goals and aspirations in life.
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