Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. • why you think the rent shouldn't be increased • what will you do if it's increased

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
this
letter in context with the increment in the
rent
price. I feel disappointed with
this
sudden revision of the
rent
agreement. I have been living in
this
apartment for almost two years now,
however
, you have never given any heads-up about the change in the rental price. As you are aware that I am studying in Umass Lowell which is only a half mile away from my house and
as a result
, I decided to stay in your apartment. But the payment increase in
rent
seems unfair as you have not stated any proper reason which makes it obscure to comprehend
this
revision. I would appreciate it if you could reconsider
this
change as I love the apartment and it is a walking distance from my school,
however
, I would understand if you still want to increase the
rent
. Unfortunately, I will be unable to become your tenant in the future as the
rent
is a bit pricey and it is unaffordable for me. I have already found a replacement who is interested in your flat and would like to move-in from the
next
month. If you can rethink about keeping the same rental charge as we have now, I would like to continue staying in the same place. Thank you in advance for giving time to
this
matter and I hope to hear positive from you soon. Yours faithfully Ria
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