It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued by people that governments should concentrate on the well-being of their own population rather than helping needy individual's across the globe.
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the government's primary responsibility is to provide their society with basic necessities and continuous growth, countries should always stretch helping hands to the public in crisis across the world. On the one hand, the government's main duty is to satisfy the basic needs of its citizens. Legislations should continuously strive to provide the basic necessities
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as food, health and education to their own public. Countries' growth economically is depended on how happy and content the population of their country is living.
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, many people lost their loved ones due to coronavirus in the
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year post vaccine got developed each nation ensured all citizens in their place were vaccinated before exporting it to other parts of the world.
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, nations should always show empathy towards humans. Globally many countries face challenging issues like natural calamities, wars and unexpected health emergencies. When
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situation arises union should do their best to serve needy people irrespective of the country they belong to.
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, South Africa was badly hit by drought in 2010, and several thousands of children suffered from malnutrition which led to growth abnormalities.
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issue would have not been resolved unless worldwide nations came forward to serve the hungry with food supplies. In conclusion, even though governments' major goal is to improve their own citizens living standards by providing basic needs, nations should always consider serving the needy around the world as it way of showing gratitude to humankind.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resources
  • moral obligation
  • global stability
  • economic impact
  • domestic issues
  • international aid
  • diplomatic relationships
  • resource allocation
  • healthcare
  • education
  • infrastructure
  • national priorities
  • desperate need
  • indirect benefit
  • goodwill
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