In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days conflicts are increasing globally. The question is, is that because the leaders are
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, and what if the
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lead the
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? In
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,
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are bringing more conflicts and war to our
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. The main reason given to support
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claim is that
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. They are stronger and more aggressive. They show harder decisions and they rely on their own ideas.
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,
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usually think by their brains not their hearts.
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of looking for financial impaction or political benefits but not concerned about any emotional aspects.
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, while the
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has a living crisis, the minister thinks to increase income taxes
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of finding other reasonable solutions. Generally,
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have one way of thinking and sometimes they do not study the possible results of their actions.
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, in my point of view,
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always show an incredible job when they become a leader.
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attention to detail and take care of all the applied aspects.
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they insist to be a leader, they deal with compassion in every separate task.
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is because they listen to their team and feel what their society needs.
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the
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are more emotional, they are more creative and looking for peace and stable life.
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, the government usually give chance to all male and female to be a leader which is creating a competitive atmosphere.
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, everyone wants to prove his point.
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by more wisdom and
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by more sensitivity. In conclusion, it is evident that the
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will have more conflicts if the leaders are remaining
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. The government should accept the concepts of
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's leadership and allow them to practice leading the
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • male-dominated leadership
  • empathetic
  • cooperative
  • inclusive society
  • governance
  • diversity
  • sustainable peace
  • social welfare
  • collaborative approach
  • international relations
  • leadership qualities
  • decision-making processes
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