Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

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IT IS TRUE THAT ALL COUNTRIES GOVERNMENTS HAVE FACED SOME

PROBLEMS

IN A RELATED TO

EDUCATION

AND POLLUTION. THESE

PROBLEMS

BECOME MORE CHALLENGING FOR THE

GENERATION OF THE ERA. I EXPLAIN THE WHAT

PROBLEMS

WILL BE POSSIBLE IN

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THE

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FUTURE FOR US IN THE

TWO PARAGRAPHS.

FIRSTLY

, PEOPLE ARE USING MORE EFFECTIVE SOURCES THAN NATURAL GREEN RESOURCES, WHOSE AVAILABLE IN THE WORLD.

HENCE

GLOBAL

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THE GLOBAL

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WARMING RATE GROW EVERYWHERE AND IT IS EFFECT TOO MUCH TO US.

FOR INSTANCE

, WE ARE USING FUELS , COAL

FOR

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GENERATE ELECTRICITY OR IN CARS.

CONSEQUENTLY

, OZON LAYER IS DAMAGED TOO MUCH AND THE WEATHER SEASON CAN NOT WORK PROPERLY. SOME PEOPLE ASSERT THAT NOWADAYS, AGRICULTURE HAVE MORE PROBLEM THAN FARMING. BECAUSE

THIS

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OF THIS

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, THEY CAN NOT BE SURE WHAT TIME THE WEATHER WILL CHANGE OR ANYTIME RAINY OR HOT TEMPERATURES IN WINTER. THEY CAN NOT BE SURE ABOUT FARMING.

SECONDLY

, DAY BY DAY,

EDUCATION

IS BECOMING MORE EXPENSIVE .SO, PUPILS ARE SUFFERING FROM

FINANCIAL

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A FINANCIAL

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CRISIS. MANY PEOPLES WANT TO GET GOOD

EDUCATION

AND PURSUE THEIR CAREER IN THEIR SKILLS OR HOBBIES. BUT, THEY CAN NOT ELIGIBLE TO AFFORD IT ON FINANCE BASIC. FOR A ILLUSTRATION, UNIVERSITIES OR SCHOOLS GIVE MORE VIRTUE CLASSES THAN OFFLINE CLASSES. BECAUSE OF THAT , STUDENTS HAVE TONOT GOTTEN GOOD KNOWLEDGE OR FOCUS ON ONLINE WITH REGARDS TO EVERYONE DO NOT HAVE PROPER INTERNET FOR ACCESS TO ONLINE CLASSES. STUDENTS ARE FACING LIKE

THIS

PROBLEMS

. IN CONCLUSION, GOVERNMENT NEED TO START SOME CAMP TO AWARE THE COMMUNITIES OR PROVIDE PROPER FUND TO SOLVE

PROBLEMS

. IN

EDUCATION

. GOVERNMENT SHOULD PROVIDE SOME GOOD FACILITIES FOR STUDENTS IN GOVERNMENT SCHOOLS.

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