Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

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IT IS TRUE THAT ALL COUNTRIES GOVERNMENTS HAVE FACED SOME

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IN A RELATED TO

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AND POLLUTION. THESE

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BECOME MORE CHALLENGING FOR THE

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GENERATION OF THE ERA. I EXPLAIN THE WHAT

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FUTURE FOR US IN THE

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TWO PARAGRAPHS.

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, PEOPLE ARE USING MORE EFFECTIVE SOURCES THAN NATURAL GREEN RESOURCES, WHOSE AVAILABLE IN THE WORLD.

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WARMING RATE GROW EVERYWHERE AND IT IS EFFECT TOO MUCH TO US.

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, WE ARE USING FUELS , COAL

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GENERATE ELECTRICITY OR IN CARS.

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, OZON LAYER IS DAMAGED TOO MUCH AND THE WEATHER SEASON CAN NOT WORK PROPERLY. SOME PEOPLE ASSERT THAT NOWADAYS, AGRICULTURE HAVE MORE PROBLEM THAN FARMING. BECAUSE

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, THEY CAN NOT BE SURE WHAT TIME THE WEATHER WILL CHANGE OR ANYTIME RAINY OR HOT TEMPERATURES IN WINTER. THEY CAN NOT BE SURE ABOUT FARMING.

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, DAY BY DAY,

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IS BECOMING MORE EXPENSIVE .SO, PUPILS ARE SUFFERING FROM

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CRISIS. MANY PEOPLES WANT TO GET GOOD

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AND PURSUE THEIR CAREER IN THEIR SKILLS OR HOBBIES. BUT, THEY CAN NOT ELIGIBLE TO AFFORD IT ON FINANCE BASIC. FOR A ILLUSTRATION, UNIVERSITIES OR SCHOOLS GIVE MORE VIRTUE CLASSES THAN OFFLINE CLASSES. BECAUSE OF THAT , STUDENTS HAVE TONOT GOTTEN GOOD KNOWLEDGE OR FOCUS ON ONLINE WITH REGARDS TO EVERYONE DO NOT HAVE PROPER INTERNET FOR ACCESS TO ONLINE CLASSES. STUDENTS ARE FACING LIKE

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. IN CONCLUSION, GOVERNMENT NEED TO START SOME CAMP TO AWARE THE COMMUNITIES OR PROVIDE PROPER FUND TO SOLVE

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. IN

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. GOVERNMENT SHOULD PROVIDE SOME GOOD FACILITIES FOR STUDENTS IN GOVERNMENT SCHOOLS.

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