Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experiences

There is no doubt that these days forming a family is a critical face in our life. Even though you formed a family early twenties or later after
thirty
, family is important. In
this
essay, I will investigate the positive and negative views of
this
development status and I will draw my own conclusion. In terms of
positive
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view, getting married after
age
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of
thirty
has various advantages.
Firstly
, the couple will feel they are stable and their relationship is healthy. They will have a chance to know each other insights.
Secondly
, I strongly agree, that if they get married they will believe in the value of their marriage contract and do more respect for its meaning.
In other words
, those who get married at any
age
will have the benefit of a comfortable and relaxing feeling, as they can be still happy because they are together. They avoid being alone or lonely which might cause more problems if they become older. I believe that the marriage
age
belongs to cultural habits.
For example
, In European
countries
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do not have the same pressure from their society as Arabic countries have.
Therefore
, they feel free to choose their marriage date even though they
havehad
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have had
a baby before.
However
, the main negative view
that is
given to support
this
claim is that the people who get married later after
thirty
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will have fewer chances to have a big family.
This
is because life development is accelerating and they will have many difficulties managing to have one or two children.
As a result
, no
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to avoid getting married after
thirty
, but they might have many challenges that need to be concerned.
Although
they face challenges in forming families after the
age
of
thirty
, they will be well-educated people and more engaged in the community. In conclusion, I believe that it is positive action to get married; does not matter about the
age
. Every stage of our life has its own experiences which we should learn how to cooperate and deal with it.
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