The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, the number of

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has been rising.

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, it is suggested that suggestion giving much stricter

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is the only way to improve

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. I am not convinced by

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suggestion for some reasons. is to give much stricter

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for

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participant offences. On the one hand, Stricter

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are proven to be effective for driving offences and will lower the number of

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on the

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. In fact,

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' irresponsibility frequently causes

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accidents

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. They ran wildly, frequently exceeding the speed limit , and

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has many negative effects on

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participants on the

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. Once, stricter

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are implemented,

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will be more cautious so as not to receive any severe

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. makes

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implement

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. They won't know what to do if they don't receive any severe

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.

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, receiving severe sanctions helps prevent

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from violating the law resulting in there will be more law-abiding citizens as well as fewer crashes caused by careless and irresponsible

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.

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, the implementation of receiving severe sanctions to improve

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is a useful approach.

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, there are other ways to deal with

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who violate the law, there are different ways.

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, We can enhance

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safety

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by installing surveillance cameras on the main and minor roads.

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may be a viable solution as

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will obey

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laws if they are aware that all of their actions are recorded re is a camera present.

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, the

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officers standing on the

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a good measure. Because

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participants tend to behave properly whenever they see

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officers nearby. law-abiding behaviour will be dealt with immediately if the

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officer stands there.

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, it is necessary to raise public awareness of and comprehension of

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.

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is the most important thing solution since once, everyone is aware of

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, the number of

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will be significantly reduced. In conclusion, Heavy

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are is a promising measure to deal with unlaw-abiding behaviours. But it is not the only

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which can be applied as

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we have there are many possible ways to punish

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' irresponsibility.