Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think the education will not work. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

Junk

food

has detrimental effects on human

beings

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health

according to the experts.Some

people

need to be educated about the benefits of not taking

junk

food

,

other

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feel no results can be accomplished, as compared to

education

about not having

junk

food

.

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essay will discuss both views according to

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.In my opinion,

Education

is necessary for the community about limiting

junk

food

.

Education

about

food

plays an important role in

people

's

health

.

Health

can be built based on the

food

, we intake.If anyone understands the impact of taking

junk

food

, a person can control their diet

accordingly

.Today scenario's

people

are more conscious of their

health

and they want to understand the

nutrition

of

food

.

This

awareness allows them to intake the right category of foods.

For example

, According to the survey,

Health

Challanels have the highest

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,as

people

are interested to improve their

health

by increasing their

knowledge

and taking the right action on time for the improvement of their

health

.

Additionally

, humans feel that, if they improve their

knowledge

of

food

, they are able to feed their families with the right nutritious

food

and contribute to family progress.

For instance

, We have noticed that

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there is high consumption of Ghee as compared to refined oil these days, since

people

grasp the

knowledge

of

food

,whereas Refined oil is only a market gimmick to disorient the consumers. On the other side,

Education

does not matter, because humans want to be in a comfortable zone and they do not want to change.Change is difficult for every individual.Due to

this

, the obese population is increasing especially in the United States.Like, As we have seen there are 60% of

people

in America are obese according to studies as they are not aware of the product's

nutrition

and consume based on its taste only.

Also

,

People

feel that taste is more important than the

nutrition

of any

food

,so they do not want to take

knowledge

.

This

allows the business to grow by focusing on taste only

instead

of

nutrition

and keep on taking

junk

food

. In conclusion,

People

have diverse views on the

knowledge

of

junk

food

.In my opinion,

knowledge

is power and needs to be used for

health

benefits and to limit

junk

food

.