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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.

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In these times, athletic channels are now expanded and more popular
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 of the world. Some people assert that live
sports
 on television avert children and adolescents from actually playing
sports
 in real life, it is a controversial issue and deserves a thorough discussion. From my standpoint,
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 would argue that there is still an advantageous thing that
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to
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human life and participating in different physical activity is far
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 than only enjoying it on television. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the view and present my opinion. To start with, social media can bring lots of bad factors in the young healthy life but
also
 may alter the teenagers' interests because of the widespread coverage of
sports
 programmes. Young people these days have passions for numerous
sports
 and many of them follow that passion to where
thier
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their
 idols led them.
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, two of my brothers are a huge
fan
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 of football and they enjoy playing it more than just
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 fun observing matches but some others don't, They prefer
sports
channel
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 as part of entertainment rather than encouragement for their sportsmanship skill development.
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