Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most communities, education is the most important aspect handled by the government. Recently, there is a public debate about whether citizens should go to school until they reach the age of 18 years old. In my opinion, I agree that everyone must spend their time on a full-time learning process before they reach adulthood as it will greatly benefit both the person and

also

society.

Firstly

, many developed regions obligate their resident to attend formal learning processes until high school by providing free tuition.

For example

, various countries

such

as South Korea provides free educational fees in public schools. Not only the tuition but

also

the additional cost

such

as lunch meals and uniforms.

Consequently

,

this

results in the highest average IQ score of students in the world coming from

this

country. Another point to consider is the human brain keeps growing until someone reaches the age of 25 years old.

This

means that those years are the golden moment to teach and educate people about specific behaviour and mannerism.

Moreover

, it could decrease the amount of juvenile crime because of the well-mannered person.

Thus

, every nation's goal to become a well-developed country could be easily implemented. In conclusion, full-time education is an obligation for every nation's younger generations. The reason is that various developed countries already implemented

this

rule and proved the great result

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the advancement of their nations. Specifically, it is the best time to guide children to become good people before they are fully grown.