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Some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #bout #history #house #research
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there is no doubt that these days
people
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 care about knowing the
people
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 who live in their new houses and the history of the house or the building. as we know, our
home
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 is so important, we have to choose it very well because at the end of the day we need a comfortable place we need a cosy place to spend the time with our family. in
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 essay I am going to discuss more reasons for the matter.
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 with, there are many causes that encourage
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 to
search
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 for a house or flat or building where they going to live on. One of these reasons is that
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 put a lot of money in usually to buy their
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 in almost all countries so since they will spend the money they should
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 about if the history of the house is good or not if it is
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 safe or not. Another instance, is in some houses maybe in the past there was,
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,for ,example murder or crime and
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 going to decrease the value of the building of the
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 and some
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 do not want to live in these houses even if it is cheap. In case the community want to know about the past of the building or even about the area, there are many ways to do it. one of the ways and the simplest one is to ask the neighbour who lives near there. another and the most famous way is to
search
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 on the internet. ,
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 there are apps that give the rate and information about the place for society. so there are many ways if you want to know. in conclusion, it is so good and important thing to
search
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 for your future
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 because it is not about just you it is something for your family. So we all have to help and give the information to each other when we need to.
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