You rent a flat with your friend who is moving out. It is too expensive for you to pay the rent alone.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: •explain the situation •describe why you would like to stay in this flat •ask the landlord if you can find another flatmate

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Dear Mr Jones, Hope

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letter finds you well, I am writing to request some favour from your side related to paying the

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alone while accommodating in your flat. As you know that I and my friend Carter are living here for four years and were bearing the

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beautiful flat shared basis but now our academics are over and due to

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, my friend is moving back to live with his parents. Unfortunately, I am left alone here but for ,now I can not switch to any other flat for now because my 2 semesters are left and the ease for me to live here is that I have my university and workplace near to

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area and due to

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would prefer to stay here for a year.

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, being a student I do not earn that much to bear the

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of the whole apartment and can only pay half of the

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I used to pay.

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, I request you to grant me some time to find any other flatmate in my friend circle so that it would be feasible for me to make both ends meet. Faithfully, Martin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

196 words

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You rent a flat with your friend who is moving out. It is too expensive for you to pay the rent alone.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: •explain the situation •describe why you would like to stay in this flat •ask the landlord if you can find another flatmate

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Today more and more people want things instantly. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money- making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness is considered very important in life, but it is hard to define. why is happiness difficult to define? what factors are important in achieving happiness?