Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's
era
everyone Add a comma
,era
use
different means of technology which is beneficial for various industries. It Change the verb form
uses
is consider
by many Change the verb form
is considered
people
that the products we buy is
the reflection of the promotion by the company and not based on the needs of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
public
. I Add an article
the public
am totally agree
with Change the verb form
totally agree
this
statement and in this
essay, I will explain the reasons.
To commence with, in the advertisement the manufacturers hide some facts. To explore it, products shown by the anchor mention the advantages for the people
and take the benefits by mention
the side-effects in small words. Wrong verb form
mentioning
For example
, the headlines of 'India Times' mention that a man sue
the cleaning chemical supply organisation for writing the disadvantages of liquid in not clearly visible font, which results in Change the verb form
sues
the
skin irritation. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, it is proven that the
Correct article usage
apply
people
ignore the drawbacks under
the influence of brand Change preposition
of
name
.
Fix the agreement mistake
names
In addition
to this
, the reputation of the brand encourge
Correct your spelling
encourage
encourages
the
individuals to buy expensive stuff which is commercial presented by Correct article usage
apply
the
celebrities. To explicate, when the Correct article usage
apply
youngester
follow their favourite star they ignore the cons or negative side of goods and blindly shop Correct your spelling
youngster
youngest
them
just Change preposition
for them
for
show off to their friends. Change preposition
to
For instance
, In a
experiment it is found that in Change the article
an
an
TV programme a famous personality Change the article
a
encourge
the use of alcohol, Correct your spelling
encourages
it
Correct pronoun usage
which
divert
the mind of folks to purchase and drink. Correct subject-verb agreement
diverts
As a result
, the visuals on screen by some big shots affect the mind of people
.
In conclusion, one can say that,
the promotions of goods not only sometimes hide Remove the comma
apply
truth
but Add an article
the truth
also
influence youngesters
to shop Correct your spelling
youngsters
expensive
things.Change preposition
for expensive
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