Your neighbours have been smoking in their apartment. Write a letter to the management company. In your letter • give details about the problem • explain how you would like the problem to be solved • describe other issues you've been having with the neighbours Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...

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Dear Building
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Management
Managment
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Management
, I'm writing you
this
letter to inform you about my concern regarding my neighbours in 405,
4th floor
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building C west.Sadly,I'm a resident in 404,and I've been smelling smoking tobacco since I moved into the building.
Although
, I was informed that
this
building is a free smoking zone.
Moreover
,I talked to them
verbly
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verbally
several times ,and they promised that they will not smoke in the
apartment
again.But,unfortunately,nothing changed. Actually, I suggest if it is possible for me to move to the 5th floor,
apartment
516, I heard that
Mr.
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John left
last
week.
Additionaly
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Additionally
Additional
,I recommend that your
managment
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management
send a written warning letter to
apartment
405 , that if they did not
banned
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smoking ,you should ask them to leave due to contract terms and conditions.Plus,I really suffered from
apartment
405,every weekend they party so hard,invite their friends along,nearly 50
person
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in a space which fits barely 15
person
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,
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on the music so loud ,sometimes till 3 in the morning.After that, all cups and glass drinks
is
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all over the hallway.
Finally
, please consider my above suggestions and take
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quick action towards
this
issue ,waiting for your kind reply as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely , Mazen Abujabal
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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