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One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you think governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days, one of the frequent issues that governments should solve is the growth of the
people
 of the
world
.
This
 essay will discuss the causes and effects of
this
 problem. Nowadays, most of the country has
overpopulation
. Because of policies of the government and lack of education of the
people
. in ,addition most countries have not any policies on family planning and poor
people
 have no knowledge of sex education. These causes lead to an increase in the population of the country. Overall,
overpopulation
 can lead to scarcity of resources because many
people
 demand lots of products to use.
In addition
, it affects the
world
's economy.
On the other hand
, the growth of
people
 create stress,
For example
, Traffic gem and queue is a really serious problem that government should concern about. Governments all around the
world
 should take part in developing policies to sort out
this
 problem. Countries should start educational programs, to educate their citizens about the drawbacks of
overpopulation
. Other than that, laws should be created and implemented to stop overcrowding.
Although
,
overpopulation
 has adverse effects on the
world
 these days,
however
,
this
 issue can be solved with accurate and effective planning by governments.
This
 issue should be addressed early so that, future generations should not face its consequences of it.
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