in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read eveything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books

Nowadays, more people are using the

internet

to read whatever they want for free. That for, it is claimed that newspapers and books will no longer be an

interset

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interest

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to others hereafter and

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will be replaced by online

publicaton

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publication

publications

. I fully agree with

this

statement.

First

of all, from a financial perspective,

the

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online publications are cheaper and

affordabel

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affordable

because they do not need

paper

, which is an expensive item used in producing newspapers and books. Many websites are

for

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free which means all

what

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you need is

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internet

access.

As a

result

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many readers choose to read online books

instead

of buying the printed edition.

For instance

, the

book

of harry potter cost around 50 for the printed edition while you can read it and download it only for 5 dollars through the website.

Consequently

, many readers choose

online

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the online

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version

over printed ones, which will eventually result in the

elemination

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elimination

of the

paper

version

In addition

, for

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someone

wants

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who wants

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to get a newspaper or buy a

book

there will be time wasted to reach the

book store

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bookstore

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and buy it from there

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or wait for it to be delivered to an address.

this

is not the issue

the

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of the

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online publication. As

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aforementioned

aforementiod

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all

what

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that

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is needed is

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internet

access and start searching at any time and some of the websites will require a small amount of money as

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subscription

fees

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fee

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to be paid monthly. That means

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you can search for the

news

or read the

book

on your digital device in

faster

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a faster

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way and do not have to wait till the

day to get the latest

news

Moreover

, compared to

paper

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the paper

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version

, the online one can provide you with

numareous

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numerous

news

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the same website.

For example

, one online newspaper can have numerous categories of

news

all

what

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that

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you need to click on the one you

interested

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are interested

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in. To conclude, the world moving toward digitalization. the use of

paper

version

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becomig

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becoming

less

convienent

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convenient

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for

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people.

This

drives them to search online.

Also

, it will be cheaper to use the

internet

for online reading and a faster, more efficient way compared to the

paper

version

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