Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

These days our world population dramatically increasing with health problems.

Therefore

, they often choose

alternative

medicines

instead

of visiting their family

doctor

.

Consequently

, I strongly believe that there are many negatives development rather than

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positive trend.

First

of all, nowadays most majority people like to use

alternative

drugs

such

as neem leaves and turmeric to cure

illnesses

. Those drugs

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can be found easily and cheapest way to treat some kinds of

illnesses

.

For example

, the old generation used neem leaves against chickenpox. ,

Also

some old majority used turmeric to cure wounds and kill germs. Because during the past

decade's

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healthcare has not developed like today. The reason is our old generations have been using herbal

medicine

against many allergies and viruses. So

this

is the positive side of

alternative

medicine

.

However

, there are many negative effects we can observe.

Firstly

, some majorities

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herbal

medicine

instead

of visiting a

doctor

might dangerous for human life. Because they do not have any knowledge of the

illnesses

and continuously take herbal

medicine

and get worst that

illnesses

.

For example

, whether someone has chickenpox and treat with neen leaves

instead

of visiting a

doctor

and take proper

medicine

might the patient will dying.

Secondly

, they may cause unknown side effects and not have benefits.

In addition

, when people used

this

medicine

without any results they might lose their money

also

. So always a better option is to visit a qualified

doctor

Because they had good knowledge

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for any kind of illness and know how to provide the best treatment with proper

medicine

. In conclusion, using

alternative

drugs is not the best way to treat any kind of disease and one should visit a physician to take proper medication.