Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

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These days our world population dramatically increasing with health problems.
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, they often choose
alternative
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medicines
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of visiting their family
doctor
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, I strongly believe that there are many negatives development rather than
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positive trend.
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of all, nowadays most majority people like to use
alternative
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drugs
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as neem leaves and turmeric to cure
illnesses
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. Those drugs
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can be found easily and cheapest way to treat some kinds of
illnesses
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, the old generation used neem leaves against chickenpox. ,
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some old majority used turmeric to cure wounds and kill germs. Because during the past
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healthcare has not developed like today. The reason is our old generations have been using herbal
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against many allergies and viruses. So
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is the positive side of
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medicine
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, there are many negative effects we can observe.
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, some majorities
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herbal
medicine
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instead
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of visiting a
doctor
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might dangerous for human life. Because they do not have any knowledge of the
illnesses
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and continuously take herbal
medicine
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and get worst that
illnesses
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, whether someone has chickenpox and treat with neen leaves
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of visiting a
doctor
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and take proper
medicine
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might the patient will dying.
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, they may cause unknown side effects and not have benefits.
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, when people used
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medicine
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without any results they might lose their money
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. So always a better option is to visit a qualified
doctor
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Because they had good knowledge
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a cure
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cure
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for any kind of illness and know how to provide the best treatment with proper
medicine
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. In conclusion, using
alternative
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drugs is not the best way to treat any kind of disease and one should visit a physician to take proper medication.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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