Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

A new

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has been emerging that makes all countries across the world similar because of an improvement in accessibility

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people to purchase whatever they need.

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globalization has several cons, I believe that it ends up leading to

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comfortable life. On the positive side, people

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four corners of the globe can reach the same opportunity to have what they need.

This

chance certainly opens many crucial windows to the world.

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, as a consequence,

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entrepreneurs

can feel like

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they have

openely

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access to a market in scale all continents with a wide range of diversity in culture, tradition, religion, language and so on.

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, all sort of

businesses

, small

businesses

and big ones, can show their

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to make their contributions more efficient than

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past. Apart from that, handcraft industries a have

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chance even if they have been overlooked for several decades.

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local

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businesses

are more likely to lose their profits in a

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competition in which mega multi-national companies are monopolizing all markets of the world.

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local companies raise their product ‘s quality those big firms have a huge potential to most customers and offer prices. In conclusion, I believe that every coin has two sides. While the opportunity to have access to all markets

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more likely to lead

better

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, there some economic concerns for small local

businesses

which are not as powerful and wealthy as international big firms to be able to compete is existing.