An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Offer to find somewhere to stay • Give advice about what to do • Give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Anna, How are you? I hope all is well. It's been a long

time

since we've been in touch. I received your letter and I look forward to seeing you and I hope we can have some

time

to catch up. Anyways, I found a great place for you to stay. It is a newly renovated cottage house, just within a walking distance

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the Discovery Sky Diving resort. I remember quite well that you want to experience sky diving. Well,

this

will be a great

time

to try! But before all that, I want to tell you that the main access roads from the airport to the city centre are all under construction. Remind the cab driver on your way to the cottage to use the diversion roads so that you will not be stuck in traffic.

Lastly

, do not forget your winter gloves. You forgot it the

last

time

you were here and we had a hard

time

buying one because of the short supply of stocks.

Also

, bring an extra winter coat just in case. I look forward to seeing you pretty soon! Warm regards, Alex

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