An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Offer to find somewhere to stay • Give advice about what to do • Give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Anna, How are you? I hope all is well. It's been a long

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since we've been in touch. I received your letter and I look forward to seeing you and I hope we can have some

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to catch up. Anyways, I found a great place for you to stay. It is a newly renovated cottage house, just within a walking distance

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the Discovery Sky Diving resort. I remember quite well that you want to experience sky diving. Well,

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will be a great

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to try! But before all that, I want to tell you that the main access roads from the airport to the city centre are all under construction. Remind the cab driver on your way to the cottage to use the diversion roads so that you will not be stuck in traffic.

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, do not forget your winter gloves. You forgot it the

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you were here and we had a hard

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buying one because of the short supply of stocks.

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, bring an extra winter coat just in case. I look forward to seeing you pretty soon! Warm regards, Alex

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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