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It is the tendency of human beings are the copy from each other this spreads the popularity of fashion lifestyle and consumer goods and help these industries to grow. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the approaches that fashion companies or some other manufacturers get the most of it to earn more money, is the imitation habit which is instinctively within
humans
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 for the whole of their life.
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 always watch other peers’ lifestyles and try to be like them. I fully support
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 idea for some reasons. If we check out humanity's history, we would obviously see that even our ancestors have used mimics to learn from each other how to survive, cook, and live.
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, it helped us to improve.
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, if scientists hadn’t used their previous colleagues' knowledge and just wanted to follow up their individual ways, they could not be so successful. They had to experience whatever already someone else had done it.
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, we are no exception, too. sometimes we
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 ability unconsciously even in simple stuff
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 as dressing up or buying something.
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, copying from other
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 is not something strange about
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.
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, companies which produce luxury goods, cosmetics, cars, and even household tools, have done an array range of research during
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 decade to increase their sales. In regard, they have realized that one of the best ways to raise their benefits is by hiring some
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 who are called influencers.
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 as these influencers we can name well-known football players, singers, actors or actresses and many other
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 who on social media have enormous followers. These researches
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 revealed that
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 like to live like their idols,
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, they
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 these influencers on some platforms like Instagram, YouTube and TikTok to promote their productions.
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 is why Nike as a famous company every year paid lots of money to Cristiano Ronaldo to
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 their shoes in his videos. In conclusion,
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 like to imitate other
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’s lifestyles and it has been usual throughout all of
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, and businessmen figured out
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 behaviour of
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 and
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 it to make more money. I completely agree with
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