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People produce more waste today than in the past. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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It irrefutable fact that these days humans overuse a lot of unnecessary things
such
 as plastic items .
Then
this
 phenomenon to bring that produce more waste than in the past .
This
 essay intends to analyze some causes of
this
 event and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation. Today, we live in an era of technology in which we can produce what we need for our needs .
For instance
, if we go to the shop and buy something. After that vendor will give us a packet to put on our purchased item .
Then
 we come home we throw them away in the trashcan.
That is
 why
this
 happens to bring air infection. Because packets are weather affects the air and causes it to change . So the state has taken a number of measures to get rid of
such
 negative effects.
In particular
,since 2019 free packets have been cancelled.
In addition
, at
this
 time we always use plastic stuff.
For example
,we use it for keeping food products.
Also
,water bottles are made of it. And we live completely dependent on plastics. Plastics are the main material of our modern world. But it negatively affects our life and health.
Also
, it causes soil abuse water deterioration and air corruption
such
 as serious environmental infection. These problem solutions are not easy but the government must reduce producing
this
 thing .
Then
 we will low usage it. Summing up I once again reaffirm that nowadays majority of people purpose harmful objects in their life .
This
 problem can be dealt with by taking simple measures and individuals and governments should collectively take these steps.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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