Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Children
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the nation
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. They
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in
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the economy and represent their country worldwide but nowadays youth is lacking focus on their
studies
in institute. There are several causes of
this
like environment, technological gadgets and not
participation
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in other
activities
. The
first
reason
that comes
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my mind is their home environment. Sometimes pupils
suffers
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from bad situations in their homes which
ruins
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their concentration
from
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on
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studies
.
For example
, when
children
see their parents suffering from
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financial condition or their mother has
been
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suffered
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from domestic violence. The
second
reason
is,
children
use mobiles,
computers
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and computers
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all the
time
which somehow impacts their health and mind. They get addiction
of
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using these technical devices.
Therefore
, in schools students think about
videos
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games and other stuff which they always see
into
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these gadgets. The
third
reason
is not getting
time
to get engaged
into
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hobbies and play with their friends.
For instance
, some guardians force their
children
to focus only on
studies
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their studies
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all the
time
either
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whether
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they are at home or school.
This
forceful condition automatically moves them away from
studies
as they always try to find some way to do other
activities
like play. There are numerous ways that can solve
this
problem and helps to increase their concentration on
studies
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their studies
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. As an
example
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enough
time
has been provided by their guardians to get
involve
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in games and sports. In
this
way they will feel fresh as well as their brain will get active and they
becomes
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happy which will directly increase their interest in
studies
. Moving
further
, parents should give them limited access of using mobiles and tablets because overuse of these devices has a bad effect on their wellness. In schools, extra
activities
and
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task
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should be provided by their mentors. So that they can participate in sports and other volunteer
activities
which help them in many ways. In conclusion, parents, family and teachers all should take care of the mental state of
children
that how they are behaving and why they are lacking concentration
from
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their
studies
because there is a possibility of any
reason
behind that they are not doing well in
studies
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their studies
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in schools and classroom.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Concentration
  • Engagement
  • Curriculum
  • Attention span
  • Learning disorders
  • Interactive learning
  • Personalized learning
  • Supportive learning environment
  • Mental health
  • Organizational skills
  • Educational policy
  • Mindfulness
  • Screen time
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