Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
Children
are the future of nation
. They Add an article
the nation
a nation
contributes
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contribute
in
the economy and represent their country worldwide but nowadays youth is lacking focus on their Change preposition
to
studies
in institute. There are several causes of this
like environment, technological gadgets and not participation
in other Add an article
a participation
activities
.
The first
reason
that comes in
my mind is their home environment. Sometimes pupils Change preposition
to
suffers
from bad situations in their homes which Change the verb form
suffer
ruins
their concentration Correct subject-verb agreement
ruin
from
Change preposition
on
studies
. For example
, when children
see their parents suffering from poor
financial condition or their mother has Add an article
a poor
the poor
been
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apply
suffered
from domestic violence. The Change the form of the verb
suffering
second
reason
is, children
use mobiles, computers
all the Correct word choice
and computers
time
which somehow impacts their health and mind. They get addiction of
using these technical devices. Change preposition
to
Therefore
, in schools students think about videos
games and other stuff which they always see Change the noun form
video
into
these gadgets. The Change preposition
on
third
reason
is not getting time
to get engaged into
hobbies and play with their friends. Change preposition
in
For instance
, some guardians force their children
to focus only on studies
all the Correct pronoun usage
their studies
time
either
they are at home or school. Correct word choice
whether
This
forceful condition automatically moves them away from studies
as they always try to find some way to do other activities
like play.
There are numerous ways that can solve this
problem and helps to increase their concentration on studies
. As an Correct pronoun usage
their studies
example
enough Add a comma
,example
time
has been provided by their guardians to get involve
in games and sports. In Change the form of the verb
involved
this
way they will feel fresh as well as their brain will get active and they becomes
happy which will directly increase their interest in Change the verb form
become
studies
. Moving further
, parents should give them limited access of using mobiles and tablets because overuse of these devices has a bad effect on their wellness. In schools, extra activities
and Add an article
the task
task
should be provided by their mentors. So that they can participate in sports and other volunteer Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
activities
which help them in many ways.
In conclusion, parents, family and teachers all should take care of the mental state of children
that how they are behaving and why they are lacking concentration from
their Change preposition
in
studies
because there is a possibility of any reason
behind that they are not doing well in studies
in schools and classroom.Correct pronoun usage
their studies
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