In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.Other people are not interested in it saying it's boring Discuss both views and give your opinion
●In
few
nations, the majority of individuals are becoming interested in coming to know about the Correct article usage
a few
history
of Use synonyms
their
accommodation or building Change the word
the
which
they live in. Other inhabitants are not curious Change preposition
in which
in
it telling it is tedious. From my way of thinking, It is very interesting to know the Change preposition
about
history
of the place where they live.
● On the one hand, researching Use synonyms
Use synonyms
history
of humans has a number of advantages, the owners can find out who the Correct article usage
the history
first
owner of the Linking Words
house
was. Use synonyms
For instance
, if the earlier owner was a well-known actor, the current owner could advertise it and sell it at a higher cost. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the reason a cabin's Linking Words
history
is extremely significant Use synonyms
to
repair or replace things which need to be fixed. If the residence was originally built extensive years ago with substandard materials, replacement and repair would be necessary. Add a missing verb
is to
For example
, many authorities issue statute of limitation that limits the beneficial life of a building to approximately 50 years. After that, the building must be fixed or wreaked.
● Linking Words
On the other hand
, One of the Linking Words
most
greatest Change the adjective
apply
way
of learning about the Change to a plural noun
ways
history
of a building is to use the Internet. It gives people many different types of information, all the known events that happened Use synonyms
in
the reunion can be recorded. Change preposition
at
However
, if the private apartment is situated Linking Words
the
outskirts of the town, it is a fine option to request the locals. They have populated there for a long time, so their knowledge of the Change preposition
on the
neighborhood
is magnificent. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
For example
, a person who believed in TV advertising decided to purchase Linking Words
Use synonyms
house
in the suburbs. Fortunately, he arrived at the right scene, and the natives told him the story of the whole family being killed in that Add an article
a house
house
; so he could avoid the Use synonyms
house
of bad luck.
●In conclusion, it is very necessary and interesting for all living people to know about their place of residence, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
other humans may not be interested in it.Add the comma(s)
,however
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite