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you borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

#books #school #college #library #visit #time
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to
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apologise
about
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 keeping books that I borrowed from the college library
27th
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 December 2092 and never returned on time. I have
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 unpleasant The reason Situation,
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because
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to
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the
last
 week and
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 condition
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 well.
Therefore
, my parents decided to
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visit
 him and asked me to come with them. I could not refuse their request
becase
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because
 he was helping me a lot
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 my education.
In addition
, as per the
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instruction
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 one person
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 to
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colse
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close
 to him and I
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 be with him and tack care until his health condition
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to
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positive ways.
Furthermore
, I missed my class
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 two weeks and failed to
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 books on time
Howerver
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However
, I know the library
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rules
 which someone not
to
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return the books on time. but I would like to make
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 request from you which is do not
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 my library membership.
Finelly
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Finally
, I would like to
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 it
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 you as soon as possible. Thanks for you are understanding and support. Yours faithfully, Sam
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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