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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

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A number of schools obligate their learners to attend the
school
 with the same
outfit
 which is assigned by the
school
 itself.
On the other hand
, there are many schools
do
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 not follow
this
 rule. From my
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perspective
prespective
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this
 is
double-edged
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sowrd
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sword
. There are many benefits
on
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 mandating
uniform
outfit
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outfits
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 to all students in the same
school
. One of these is the application of equality between them. Pupils can feel discriminated
or
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 of low status if they do not have money to buy
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high quality
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cloths
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. But when all of them put on the same
cloths
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 quality and appear similar to each other,
this
make
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 them feel equal. Another plus point,
a
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unifrom
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uniform
 is a way to demonstrate
disipline
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discipline
 for
school
 learners.
As a result
,they learn how to follow
the
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instruction and will build a strong personality in the future. not only
this
 but
also
,
uniform
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uniforms
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 could reflect how the
school
 is organised.
On the contrary
, obligating a
school
uniform
 carry some drawbacks.
For example
, children get bored of wearing the same
outfit
 for
the
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school
 every
school
 day. In another word, they might feel uncomfortable with
this
 rule and might tend to break the instruction by wearing
different
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outfit
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outfits
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. A student will need more than one
uniform
 to use during the weekdays and should
incude
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include
 summer
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outfits
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 and
other
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 for winter
as a result
, it can be expensive
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 their parents to buy the
school
uniform
 if it was not covered by the
school
 fees. In conclusion, asking students to wear a
uniform
 has more benefits than drawbacks. It
alleviate
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 the possibility of discrimination that could happen between students who can buy expensive
cloths
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 while other can not
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that
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. It
educate
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 children to comply with
school
 orders and it
establish
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 a better character. Meanwhile, some of them will find it annoying to wear
same
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outfit
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the
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school
. at the same time, it could be
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costly
 if not included in
school
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 payment
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