Some people support modern developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. However, other people oppose this view. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The growing population is a factor which is responsible for

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of

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more agricultural products. There are several ways to achieve crops,

weather

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traditional or modernized.

This

essay will discuss why I,

likewise

many individuals, agree that modern developments in

agriculture

are more favourable. Traditional

agriculture

is desirable for a group of people who have havoc attitudes about technology.

Moreover

, they find it dangerous to make efforts in manufacturing.

On the other hand

,

this

group can not trust the product since they believe the crops are unhealthy. To illustrate, they try to tackle some factory

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and buy all they required from small farms.

Thus

, the modern method is dysfunctional for them and they do not endanger their health on account of using them. While

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traditional

agriculture

product

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products

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might be healthier, my

view point

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is that the method is not structive in

this

decade. As the requirement

of

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food has

enhanced

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, the need

of

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rapid and

efficent

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efficient

method

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has

boosted

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.

Thus

, governments show partiality to the solutions which have the most outcomes. Indeed,

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modern development speeds up all the

process

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processes

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of farming.

Moreover

, the quality is beneficially increased.

Hence

, all the

efferts

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efforts

effects

will be in the way of developing the modern

equipments

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. To conclude, people support different views in order to determine the best way of

agriculture

, modern or traditional.

This

essay argued that

although

there are some benefits in traditional methods, the

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efficiency

of modern developments

are

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the most welcome and favourable owing to the

amont

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amount

of crops.