Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think

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working an unpaid part-

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job for communities might have advantages for themselves and for the local residents. I personally agree on how part-

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for

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will bring many benefits for their future

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because they will learn how to manage their

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for

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and play.

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with, the main reason they will benefit from part-

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is that they will have hands-on experience,

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increasing their hard and soft skills,

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as communication, leadership, and teamwork. Many

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and recent graduates,

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, struggle to find

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due to a lack of experience. They will have an early start in learning how the

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field operates

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. Another one is that they can help communities that are in need and grow connections. Working with the community that surrounds them will not only benefit the community but

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themselves, because helping people will give us our own satisfaction and contribute to the country, starting with a smaller scope.

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, many adults are concerned that, because of their part-

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,

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will have less

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to play with their friends in their spare

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. But most importantly, it’s not about how the part-

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job would take their

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, but how

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will learn to manage their

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so they can

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live their lives as teens. A lot of part-

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are usually open around the summer, so they can divide their

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more easily now that the school term is over. To conclude, I fully agree with how the unpaid part-

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job will give more advantages to

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and the community, as long as they can balance their

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and play

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with friends.