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Scientists and technologists are seems to be more valued in society than artists and muscians in what extent do you agree?

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scientist's
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scientist
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 and
technologists
' worth in society is more than
artists
 and
musicians
. I disagree with
this
 topic to a great extent.
scientists
 earn more value compared to
artists
 because people believe that they are more suitable for society. They think
artists
 and
musicians
' job is not
a
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vital work and they may not be nesseccary.
however
, in my position
artists
 and
musicians
 are soul doctors. Since they create art and music and these creations exhilarate humans, even though they may not understand
this
 feeling every time
since
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they come face to face with these designs every day but it will leave its influence on them clearly.
for instance
, music is an unbreakable part of our life and we cannot suddenly stop listening to it and it shows the importance of
musicians
' creations in our life. even though I do think that
artists
 should get the value they merit but I do understand why
scientists
 and
technologists
 are more well-liked by society. They are doing a vital job. humankind
come
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 through with new needs every day and most of them are needs that
scientists
 and
technologists
 can help
.
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For example
, the invention of
the
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mobile phones made people's life much easier was made by
technologists
. In conclusion, In my ,view
artists
 and
musicians
 should not be underestimated and as human beings doing an important ,job they should get the merit they deserve. ,
,
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however
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technologists
' and
scientists
' activity is more essential for humankind's improvement and I can understand why they get more value.
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