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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #governments #course #fees #students #study #universities
The statement given here wants me to explain the course fees of the
students
 who are willing to study at
University
Correct article usage
the University
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. I totally agree with
this
 comment, the
students
 who genuinely want to pursue their education in Universities and if they are not able to pay the fees, the government should help those
students
, as they can be the
future
 of our country. There are many reasons to get agreed with the given description, one of those reasons is many
students
 are not able to complete their studies due to lack of money, education in the current era has become a business, universities ask for plenty of money to start the degree, whereas the same course or degree can be completed in cheapest amount.
Hence
 the intervention of the government is important for the
future
 of our youth. There are many youngsters who are more talented than those who are just blocking the seats in the institute and doing nothing. Small support to these people can change the scenario of our country and can secure the
future
. I believe that if 1 out of 10
students
 will be helped by the authority in education, can lead to a good
future
 for them and they will
also
 be helpful to others whenever and wherever required. The ministry can start the chain of helping people for good reason. To summarize the statement, the government need to start a new scholarship scheme and set some criteria for the same.
This
 will lead to a good
future
 for the people who are in need.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • University tuition
  • Public good
  • Economic growth
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Merit-based scholarships
  • Need-based grants
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Educational equity
  • Income-contingent loans
  • Graduate tax
  • Financial aid
  • Student loans
  • Subsidize
  • Taxpayer funding
  • Underappreciation
  • Workforce development
  • Access to education
  • Higher learning institutions
  • Government expenditure
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