Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people think taking part in individual sports is better, such as swimming. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
Nowadays
sports
are given great importance. Sportsmen and sportswomen, especially in big countries like America, Russia, China, Brazil and Use synonyms
others
are provided with maximum support and facilities from the government in order to become among the best athletes who can represent their nation in the Olympic games which would bring honour to their own countries. Some Use synonyms
sports
are played in teams while Use synonyms
others
are played individually.
There are certain schools of thought that think that it is more advantageous to participate in Use synonyms
sports
which are played in teams because playing in a squad will help the individuals to develop certain values and discipline like teamwork. Use synonyms
For example
, in football, it is a prerequisite for the Linking Words
players
to work together as a Use synonyms
team
in order to give their best when they are on the pitch. Use synonyms
In addition
, it becomes easier for individuals to attain their aims when they worked together as a Linking Words
team
because the whole Use synonyms
team
would be likely to give their best so as to reach their goal, Use synonyms
for instance
, if all the football Linking Words
players
of Manchester United club aims are to become the number one Use synonyms
team
in the world Use synonyms
then
it is possible to make Linking Words
this
dream come true if all Linking Words
players
work as one Use synonyms
team
.
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However
, some people think that taking part in individual Linking Words
sports
is much better. Use synonyms
This
may be true to some extent as being alone will encourage that person to give his or her best in order to win and not rely on other Linking Words
team
members, in a sense, Use synonyms
this
will discourage the feeling of reliance on Linking Words
others
. That individual can become the best version of himself or herself. Use synonyms
Moreover
, taking part in individual Linking Words
sports
tends to avoid issues like having to listen to each and everyone’s opinions and views which are quite time-consuming ,especially during important matches.
To conclude, I would rather prefer Use synonyms
sports
which are played in teams as Use synonyms
this
would enable the Linking Words
players
to develop several vital skills like respecting each other views, having patience with the Use synonyms
team
members and amongst Use synonyms
others
. These skills if inculcated in children at a very young age via Use synonyms
sports
would enable them to be an asset to society.Use synonyms
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