Computer is becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer use in education and give your own opinion.

the

computer

is a modern technology that important for students and workers. Every student usually

have

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one or more

computer

to

supporting

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their study.

Similarly

,workers,

they

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use

a

computer

for their work activities and amusements. On the one hand, the

computer

is useful for its users.

Firstly

,

computers

can be used for internet access. People can

use

computers

for search information as their wish.

For instance

, students can

use

computers

to search literature, journals, books, website, youtube, and other information

is

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related to their lessons or needs. Students can

use

computers

for communication and interaction with other people around the whole world. They can

use

email, skype, and social media to

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a message to another person.

Secondly

, people can be used

computers

for writing, analysing data, and presenting. They can install some applications

such

as Microsoft

office

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and other applications to manage their task.

Thirdly

,

computers

can be used for amusement.

For instance

, we can be used

computers

for playing games, watching movies, listening to music and

other

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. It can make our mind more relaxed while working.

However

,

computers

can make

a negative effects

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a negative effect

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on their users. The negative effect is usually related to

health

. There are

health

problems that can be generated by

computers

.

For example

, chronic diseases

such

as cardiovascular disease, obesity, metabolic diseases, etc.

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health

problem is eye disorders

such

as

computer

vision syndrome. Too much work with

computers

can make

someone

do

a

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less physical activity so it can be a risk factor for getting chronic diseases.

Finally

, It seems advisable that

someone

stay

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working and

use

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uses

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a

computer

for learning, writing, and amusement, but

someone

needs to keep their body healthy

with

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doing

a

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physical activity

such

as routine exercise.

Someone

also

needs to monitor their eye

health

condition and keep it healthy.