Men and women are different in term of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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It certainly cannot be denied that
men
and
women
are different in terms of their references and capabilities.
Therefore
, some
jobs
are better done by
men
and others by
women
. I definitely agree with
this
situation. The reasons for
this
are twofold.
First
and foremost, it is vitally important that nowadays, there are various types of
jobs
. Some of them are better done by
men
than construction, and mining. Opposing to
this
other
jobs
are well done by
women
.
For instance
, taking care of children at kinder gardens or like babysitters.
Women
cannot do difficult, hard
work
and
men
cannot do
work
that belongs to
women
. It is my belief that everyone should do
work
that is
suitable for them.
Secondly
and more importantly there are some
jobs
that cannot be imagined without
men
or
women
. One of them is a professional artist. Another kind of job is as a singer. We cannot imagine these occupations without
men
or ladies.
Moreover
, the government need both genders of workers. Ladies are necessary to clean and cook as employers. Of course, ladies cannot be butchers or construction workers,
however
, some
women
work
as skilled-craftsman by force.
This
is a sorrowful situation in the world.
Furthermore
, our country tries to multiply our homeland with workers
such
as businessmen and employers. By way of my conclusion, I believe that
this
issue is likely to become even more important in the future as borders between countries become increasingly blurred. It,
therefore
, demands
further
consideration.
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