In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengares. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As we have always seen in sci-fi movies, we are getting closer to the technology of using
cars
and different vehicles without manually driving them.
People
will be all called passengers and
drivers
will be AI (Artificial Intelligence).
This
essay will argue that despite the existence of disadvantages, It will be more beneficial. Nowadays, with the frantic pace of modern life
people
especially city dwellers need to collect much more time in order to make more money or do their chores. In terms of the elderly generation, are not able to do their own work and always need help as well as the disabled who always feel guilty of burden their lives on their families.
Therefore
, it's necessary to use a kind of technology to help them do their chores. It would be driverless
cars
. These
cars
are
also
can be shared between family members which
leads
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to a decline in traffic congestion and make
people
feel less concerned about parking spaces. It would be surprising for under 18 children to know they can
also
use these kinds of
cars
.
Furthermore
, as it does not have anything to do with human cognition, it will decrease the rate of accidents based on human error.
Therefore
the number of deaths caused by them will be significantly decreased.
On the other hand
, I can count two disadvantages to the usage of driverless vehicles.
Firstly
, It takes the pleasure of driving. I myself as a person who loves driving and use it somehow
instead
of tranquillizers, would not be happy just sitting in the car as a passenger.
Secondly
, it declines the number of job opportunities including truck
drivers
, bus
drivers
and taxi
drivers
. So
then
, other alternatives should be considered to help these
people
. In conclusion, after
this
essay manifested the above-mentioned points, it should be iterated that
although
the advantages of
this
novel technological innovation outweigh the disadvantages, the government should establish some rules to hinder the widespread problem of job loss for a particular part of society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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