In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengares. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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As we have always seen in sci-fi movies, we are getting closer to the technology of using

cars

and different vehicles without manually driving them.

People

will be all called passengers and

drivers

will be AI (Artificial Intelligence).

This

essay will argue that despite the existence of disadvantages, It will be more beneficial. Nowadays, with the frantic pace of modern life

people

especially city dwellers need to collect much more time in order to make more money or do their chores. In terms of the elderly generation, are not able to do their own work and always need help as well as the disabled who always feel guilty of burden their lives on their families.

Therefore

, it's necessary to use a kind of technology to help them do their chores. It would be driverless

cars

. These

cars

are

also

can be shared between family members which

leads

Change the verb form

lead

show examples

to a decline in traffic congestion and make

people

feel less concerned about parking spaces. It would be surprising for under 18 children to know they can

also

use these kinds of

cars

Furthermore

, as it does not have anything to do with human cognition, it will decrease the rate of accidents based on human error.

Therefore

the number of deaths caused by them will be significantly decreased.

On the other hand

, I can count two disadvantages to the usage of driverless vehicles.

Firstly

, It takes the pleasure of driving. I myself as a person who loves driving and use it somehow

instead

of tranquillizers, would not be happy just sitting in the car as a passenger.

Secondly

, it declines the number of job opportunities including truck

drivers

, bus

drivers

and taxi

drivers

. So

then

, other alternatives should be considered to help these

people

. In conclusion, after

this

essay manifested the above-mentioned points, it should be iterated that

although

the advantages of

this

novel technological innovation outweigh the disadvantages, the government should establish some rules to hinder the widespread problem of job loss for a particular part of society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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336 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengares. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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