Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

In

this

contemporary epoch, the issue of whether or not people's personalities are previously determined by genetic factors has become a certainly contentious one.

Although

there are valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that there is a major

personality

determiner which is early-year development. In

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concept will be

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, chief among the reasons why

such

a conventional thought is considered to be faulty is that one's

personality

is mainly shaped

as a result

of his/her interaction with fosters

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early age.

This

means that when parents are attending children-rearing programs, they will guarantee a promising generation owing to

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skills they will acquire from these courses.

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can be witnessed in Germany which holds the record as the best country

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the world to nurture children.

Therefore

, what can be said is that in order to shape straight characters, parents ought to exert a great deal of effort in attending parenting courses.

Further

and even more importantly, though, is that

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traits tend to gradually change because of the adaptability of

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human nature.

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his life, his attitude towards people will be tougher than those who had

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childhood, and he will not have the required extent of empathy to deal with surrounding individuals. An eminent example of

this

is children who have been living a substantial proportion of their lives in an orphanage, they enjoy completely unique

personality

traits.

Accordingly

, in a final analysis,

such

a shift in behaviours is considered to be a spontaneous process from birth until later life. In conclusion, after

this

essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only does the childhood period determine tendencies, but

also

human

personality

is continually altered. Eventually, I am convinced that

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of the prenatal determination of characters is inaccurate.