Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?
In
this
contemporary epoch, the issue of whether or not people's personalities are previously determined by genetic factors has become a certainly contentious one. Although
there are valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that there is a major personality
determiner which is early-year development. In this
essay, 2 of the primary reasons why I totally disagree with this
concept will be further
elaborated.
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such
a conventional thought is considered to be faulty is that one's personality
is mainly shaped as a result
of his/her interaction with fosters particularly
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means that when parents are attending children-rearing programs, they will guarantee a promising generation owing to various
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can be witnessed in Germany which holds the record as the best country of
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Therefore
, what can be said is that in order to shape straight characters, parents ought to exert a great deal of effort in attending parenting courses.
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and even more importantly, though, is that personal
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childhood, and he will not have the required extent of empathy to deal with surrounding individuals. An eminent example of Add an article
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is children who have been living a substantial proportion of their lives in an orphanage, they enjoy completely unique personality
traits. Accordingly
, in a final analysis, such
a shift in behaviours is considered to be a spontaneous process from birth until later life.
In conclusion, after this
essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only does the childhood period determine tendencies, but also
human personality
is continually altered. Eventually, I am convinced that theory
of the prenatal determination of characters is inaccurate.Correct article usage
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