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What technologies did you use to help you in your studies? Describe how it has helped you. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

#technologies #studies #support
There are numerous technologies which helped in my
studies
, among them
laptop
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 and mobile
phone
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 play a significant role. These two had potentially made my studying extremely easy
in
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 the university.
This
 essay will explain how these technologies helped me to get good scores.
To begin
 with, using of
laptop
 in the classroom helped me to take notes very easily.
Moreover
, it helped me to share my notes with friends whenever they need
it
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.
As a result
, it made everyone
to
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understand
lectures
 extremely
easy
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. Laptops
also
 helped us to collaborate with my classmates for group
studies
 and discussions during assessments.
For example
, It
also
 helped me to give presentations for seminars and
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 doubts after
lectures
.
Thus
,
laptop
using
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 during my study potentially helped me to get better grades in my class.
Secondly
, using mobile
phone
 technology
also
 brought a significant impact on my
studies
. The main reason for
this
 is, it helped me to communicate with my friends whenever I skip any
lectures
. Most importantly, it helped me to do my research work during commuting to the university.
Therefore
, it gave me additional time to work on my subject.
For instance
,
this
 technology helped me to record
the
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classroom
lectures
 and listen to
it
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them
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 later
my
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for my
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 better
understanding
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. Above all
this
,
mobile
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my mobile
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phone
 helped me to text or call my colleagues to discuss the
lectures
 in detail without any hesitations. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the
using
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 of
laptop
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laptops
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 and mobile
phone
 technologies brought a positive impact on my
studies
.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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