Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that economic

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is their most important aim.

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, whether governments think economic

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is essential or people believe another type of

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is equally important for a

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has caused a heated debate. I agree with the view that economic

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is important for the following reasons. On the one hand, some people think economic

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will create a better

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.

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is because promoting economic

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can reduce unemployment.

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, if the government funds enough can invest

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basic facilities that

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offer more career opportunities. It is crucial for Just graduated students.

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, it is clear that the

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pays attention to economic benefits that can provide citizens

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a happy life.

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, if money will spend on education and

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welfare, there is likely to produce a highly skilled population that

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a good living. More precisely, if

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's stable will lower crime rates and people’s lives will be safer.

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not to say that other types of

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are not important. We should focus on balancing

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because every

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is different especially poor ones. There are, indeed,

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limited financial and natural resources and should invest more in health care and food. In conclusion, a

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of economic thrive is necessary. In fact, the government can be concerned about economy improve so the

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can

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. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other type of growth important.