Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this be solved

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The space in urban space is diminishing day by day.Population in
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has been growing drastically,with the amount of area to live
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inversely proportional to the increasing population.
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is causing the serious complication of traffic
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in many metropolitan
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.We shall discuss the causes and solutions of
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issue down below. In my opinion,the primary reason for
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in urban centres is the migration of
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from rural and suburban communities.There are many reasons why humans have become more inclined towards shifting to
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range.A few will be discussed in
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,I strongly believe that the lack of proper resources in rural as well as sub-urbs has caused many to shift towards downtown.Basic requirements
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as clean drinking water and electricity are not being met by the government.
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,shifting to
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range would increase one's job opportunities.Finding work is relatively easier in
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.
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are wanting to migrate to bigger regions simply for better education.
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,there's another factor for bottleneck which is worth making note of,and
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the lack of proper birth control.The world population has been growing at a steady pace,recently hitting 8 million,and very soon it would reach 10 billion. There are a few things which must be done in order the avoid the obstacle of overcrowding in
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.Now,
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of simply blaming the nation
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field,and forcing them not to migrate,we could rather focus on demanding the government to provide them with required facilities
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as proper sanitised water,electricity and proper infrastructure for education etc.,which eliminates the need to relocate to bigger regions.So as long as the government doesn't put in genuine efforts, the dispute
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traffic
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would persist.
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,
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need to be thoroughly educated on the topic of birth control,so that they are well aware of the consequences.
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,even though the headache of overpopulation might not look as serious as it actually is,it has adverse outcomes.We should shift gears,and do whatever it takes to prevent
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,as one planet is all we have and we deserve to live in peace and harmony
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