Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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play a vital role in globalization. Some
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think that we should discover
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languages
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for increased connection between
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internationally
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. There are manifold advantages of
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invention
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language over the world, they would
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their business globally.
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income.
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folk should invent a language at
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level. They can easily learn
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culture
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cultures
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sector.
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do not any help from
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good grasping power. They can easily learn new things. On
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locally.
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know the
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which communicate over the world. So, folks do not need any guidance to learn about history, culture and so on. English
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universal but some countries like
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do not adopt
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culture and history. In conclusion,
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around the world
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in business globalization
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more than disadvantages of new
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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