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Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do ou agree or disagree with this statement ?

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Nowadays, finance is essential
knowledge
 for people who live in
this
 era. Some people believe that financial education should enforce as a component of the school program. In my point of view, I agree with
this
 statement, and the reason I agree will extend in the following paragraph before the conclusion will be reached.
To begin
 with, It cannot be denied that every stage of our lives is always associated with
money
.
Moreover
, If we lack financial
knowledge
, we will face debt and financial management problems.
Accordingly
, learning finance in childhood is valuable for growing up.
instead
, I learnt about
money
 management when I was young, so I can manage my income and outcome per month very well.
As a result
. I have saved
money
 every single month which convince me to invest in the stock market to earn more
money
. Eventually, I will get my financial freedom early.
In addition
, children get financial
knowledge
 when growing up so they can live smoothly, and they can get jobs in financial consulting roles.
On the contrary
, children growing up without financial
knowledge
 face a lot of financial problems
such
 as overspending
money
. they do not know what much
money
 is worth. In case, they do not have saving
money
. So , they are unsuccessful in life.
For example
, etc To conclude, financial education must be a mandatory component of the school program for children to learn about financial management. In long term, it will affect their life. They will know how to use their
money
 efficiently.
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