You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You shou

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Dear Raman, I hope

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letter finds you and your family in the best of their health. I am writing to tell you about my new house that has been constructed recently.

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two-floor construction is located in the Model Town area of our city, which has my father's office and car parking on the ground floor and 3 BHK

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floor with a beautiful balcony. The neighbourhood we are shifting into has all the amenities.

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, there are many grocery stores nearby.

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, a renowned hospital and a well-equipped gym are

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within a five-minute drive .

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locality is well connected with the other city through local transport that enables us to reach the city centre. The interior design is still going on that will be over by

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week after that my family and I have decided to perform a housewarming ceremony and it would be great if you can attend the event along with your family. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

174 words

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