Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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era, mental illness is a big

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in our

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, especially for

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. the majority of them feel like no chance and no solution for their task. as the result,

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situation makes they were stressed. today,

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students

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have

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by mental

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illnesses

because they can not manage their

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and did not socialise with others. some parents think that joining additional classes will make their

children

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more clever.

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, some teenagers get more homework than normal

students

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.

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, the

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in Indonesia have a lot of assignments because they have double

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in a day. in

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situation, when the

children

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can not manage their

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clearly, they will be stressed because did not finish the task.

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, cause the

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a lot of tasks there do not have more

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to socialise. less communication can make

children

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feel lonely. the

students

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do not have

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to share their problems,

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them burn out. there are two solutions to solve

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problem

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.

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, the

children

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must exercise their management

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skills so they can control anything they must be finished.

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, if a student has made a daily planner, they can be scheduling their activities in a day.

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way has a good impact on their mental health because their assignments will be done on

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and get perfect scores as the dream

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parents.

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, they should join a

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to expand their relations. in ,school there are many extra activities that can be joined. they can release their stress by talking and sharing their

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with each other. maybe in

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way too they can solve their

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together. in conclusion, mental health is very important in our

community

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.

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problem

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every year because some people can not control their emotions. stress can be reduced by the good ability to manage

time

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so every task can be done on

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.

furthermore

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, the

community

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can share their problems with others in

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community

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the community

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to reduce their stress level.