Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In

this

era, mental illness is a big

problem

in our

community

, especially for

students

. the majority of them feel like no chance and no solution for their task. as the result,

this

situation makes they were stressed. today,

the

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students

have

destroyed

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by mental

illnes

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illnesses

because they can not manage their

time

and did not socialise with others. some parents think that joining additional classes will make their

children

more clever.

however

, some teenagers get more homework than normal

students

.

for example

, the

students

in Indonesia have a lot of assignments because they have double

class

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classes

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in a day. in

this

situation, when the

children

can not manage their

time

clearly, they will be stressed because did not finish the task.

moreover

, cause the

students

have

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a lot of tasks there do not have more

time

to socialise. less communication can make

children

feel lonely. the

students

do not have

time

to share their problems,

then

make

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them burn out. there are two solutions to solve

this

problem

.

firstly

, the

children

must exercise their management

time

skills so they can control anything they must be finished.

for example

, if a student has made a daily planner, they can be scheduling their activities in a day.

this

way has a good impact on their mental health because their assignments will be done on

time

and get perfect scores as the dream

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parents.

secondly

, they should join a

community

to expand their relations. in ,school there are many extra activities that can be joined. they can release their stress by talking and sharing their

problem

with each other. maybe in

this

way too they can solve their

problem

together. in conclusion, mental health is very important in our

community

.

this

problem

increasing

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every year because some people can not control their emotions. stress can be reduced by the good ability to manage

time

so every task can be done on

time

.

furthermore

, the

community

can share their problems with others in

community

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to reduce their stress level.